Absolutely Story Of A Girl solo

This is a great song and i couldnt find a great solo tab so i tried to make one. Dont be 
harsh this is my first tab. :P  Feel free to email me with any corrections 
thanx

e|10b--------------------------------------------10-10-----------------10-10-|
B|10b----------------------------------8-8-8-8-8-10-10-12-12-8-8-8-8-8-10-10-|
G|-------------------------------------7-7-7-7-7-------11-11-7-7-7-7-7-------|
D|----7-7-5-4h5p4--7-9-10-9-7-7----7h9---------------------------------------|
A|------------------------------10-------------------------------------------|
E|---------------------------------------------------------------------------|

e|--------------15-15-15-15-15-12-12-10-7/10-12-12/15-15-15-15-15-15-15-12-|
B|12-12b-12-12--15-15-15-15-15-12-12-10-7/10-12-12/15-15-15-15-15-15-15-12-|
G|11-11b-11-11-------------------------------------------------------------|
D|-------------------------------------------------------------------------|
A|-------------------------------------------------------------------------|
E|-------------------------------------------------------------------------|

e|10----------------X/\-----------------------|
B|10----------------X/\-----------------------|
G|---10b-8---10b-8-----8-8-10--9-8-7----------|
D|---------9-----------7-7-9---------9-8-7----|
A|-----------------------------------------10-|
E|--------------------------------------------|

I think thats pretty correct.