Stop Before Its Too Late And Weve Destroyed It All intro

Well, theres only like one other tab for this song,and it doesn't sound quite right,
 so this is my version of the song, although this is only the intro, I hope you like it, 
this is my first tab,

-----LEGEND-----
T=Tap
P=Pull-off
H=Hammer-on
~=Vibrato
U=Up-picking during sweep
D=Down-picking during sweep
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                 *These are 2 medium speed taps where you don't do the whole pull-off 
the 13 rings for only a moment then you tap again
     T         T     T         T     T
D|--17p13p10--17p13-17p13p10--17p13-17p13p10-|
A|-------------------------------------------|
F|-------------------------------------------| X2
C|-------------------------------------------|
G|-------------------------------------------|
C|-------------------------------------------|

     T        T      T         T     T
D|--15p10p7---15p10-15p10p7---15p10-15p10p7--|
A|-------------------------------------------|
F|-------------------------------------------|
C|-------------------------------------------|
G|-------------------------------------------|
C|-------------------------------------------|

This is the strokes I use to play the sweep, i do the top almost as a slow triplet to 
it played at a decent speed
     U   U U U U  D  U D D D D
D|--17p13--------------------13h17----------------------------------------|
A|-------15----------------15---------------------------------------------|
F|---------14------------14-----------------------------------------------|
C|-----------15--------15-------------------------------------------------|
G|-------------17-12-17---------------------------------------------------|
C|------------------------------------------------------------------------|

     T         T     T         T     T
D|--17p13p10--17p13-17p13p10--17p13-17p13p10-|
A|-------------------------------------------|
F|-------------------------------------------| X2
C|-------------------------------------------|
G|-------------------------------------------|
C|-------------------------------------------|

          Triplet
         |--/\--|
D|--21~ 21-21-21---19-17-19p17p16~-|
A|---------------------------------|
F|---------------------------------|
C|---------------------------------|
G|---------------------------------|
C|---------------------------------|

Play ALL the above twice in the same order, then proceed to this


D|--15-15--------|
A|--------15-15~-|
F|---------------|
C|---------------|
G|---------------|
C|---------------|


I hope you enjoy my tab of the intro to this song, please rate!