Huttons Great Heat Engine

I posted a tab earlier of this song, but I don't feel like I did that good of a job so 
i'm submitting another one.

Tuning: Drop D (DADGBe)

Here's the inro

e:-------------------------------------------------------|
B:-------------------------------------------------------|
G:-7-----------------------------------------------------|
D:-6-0-0-0-----------------------------------------------|
A:-5-0-0-0-----------------------------------------------|
D:---0-0-0--2p0-1p0-3p0-4p0-6p0--------------------------|
      pm.

'We'll never see them again'

e:----------------------------------------------------|
B:----------------------------------------------------|
G:-7--------------------------------------------------|
D:-6-0-0-0--------------------------------------------|
A:-5-0-0-0--------------------------------------------|
D:---0-0-0--2p0-1p0-3p0-4p0-6p0-----------------------|
      pm.

'It's kinda pointless'
e:---------------------------------------------------|
B:---------------------------------------------------|
G:-7--------7----------------------------------------|
D:-6-0-0-0--6-0-0-0----------------------------------|
A:-5-0-0-0--5-0-0-0----------------------------------|
D:---0-0-0----0-0-0----------------------------------|
       pm.      pm.

Then play this

e:------------------------------------------------------|
B:-------------11--11--11---11--11---11-----------------|
G:-7-7-7-------14b-14b-14b--14b-14b--14b----------------|
D:-6-6-6------------------------------------------------|
A:-5-5-5------------------------------------------------|
D:-------0-0-0------------------------------------------|

Everything is the same except there's this kinda alternate version of the intro riff, 
you should be able to hear it. I play it like this.

e:-------------------------------------------------|
B:-------------------------------------------------|
G:-7-----------------------------------------------|
D:-6-0-0-0-------------4p0-6p0-7p0-----------------|
A:-5-0-0-0-----------------------------------------|
D:---0-0-0--2p0-1p0-3p0----------------------------|
       pm.

Everything is the same until the lyrics 'Oh she still erupts' start.

e:-------------------------------------------------|
B:-11----------11-------11--------11---------------|
G:-14b---------14b------14b-------14b--------------|
D:-------------------------------------------------|
A:-------------------------------------------------|
D:-----1-2-3------1-2-3-----1-2-3-----1-2-3-2-0----|

Then this

e:---------------------------------------------------|
B:-11----------13-------15--------17-----------------|
G:-14b---------16b------18b-------20b----------------|
D:---------------------------------------------------|
A:---------------------------------------------------|
D:-----1-2-3------1-2-3-----1-2-3------1-2-3-2-0-----|

'It's hard to believe something so quick is so thick'

e:-------------------------------------------------|
B:-------------------------------------------------|
G:-0--0--0--0--------------------------------------|
D:-0--0--0--0--------------------------------------|
A:-0--0--0--0--------------------------------------|
D:-0--0--0--0--------------------------------------|

Tune your low D string down to an A, and the start chugging away like this. Throw in 
some harmonics in there too.

e:---------------------------------------------------|
B:---------------------------------------------------|
G:---------------------------------------------------|
D:---------------------------------------------------|
A:-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-------------------------------------|
A:-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-------------------------------------|

Tune your low string back to D and then play this when the lyrics 'It's so quiet in here' start.

e:-------------------------------------------------|
B:-------------------------------------------------|
G:-------------------------------------------------|
D:-------------------------------------------------|
A:-------------------------------------------------|
D:-0-xxx-0-xxx-------------------------------------|

'The heat is my new friend'

e--------------------------------------------------------|
B:-------------------------------------------------------|
G:-7-7-7-7--8-8-8-8--9-9-9-9-9-9-------------------------|
D:-6-6-6-6--7-7-7-7--8-8-8-8-8-8-------------------------|
A:-5-5-5-5--6-6-6-6--7-7-7-7-7-7-------------------------|
D:-------------------------------------------------------|

'My new friend'


e----------------------------------------------------------|
B:---------------------------------------------------------|
G:-7-7-7-7--8-8-8-8--9-9-9-9-9-9---------------------------|
D:-6-6-6-6--7-7-7-7--8-8-8-8-8-8---------------------------|
A:-5-5-5-5--6-6-6-6--7-7-7-7-7-7---------------------------|
D:---------------------------------------------------------|

I'm still not too sure about this part it's hard to tell what's going on

e----------------------------------------------------------|
B:---------------------------------------------------------|
G:-7-------------------------------------------------------|
D:-6-------------------------------------------------------|
A:-5-------------------------------------------------------|
D:----2p0-1p0-1p0-4p0-1p0-6p0-2p0-1p0----------------------|

For the ending just strum this fast


e--------------------------------------------------------|
B:-------------------------------------------------------|
G:-7-7-7-7-7---------------------------------------------|
D:-6-6-6-6-6---------------------------------------------|
A:-5-5-5-5-5---------------------------------------------|
D:-------------------------------------------------------|

I know i already submitted a tab for this, but I feel like this is a much better tab on 
my part. Hopefully you agree with me.